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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People face the dilemma of whether sports are more beneficial to people, team sports or individual sports. While some argue that the latter like swimming, tennis are more beneficial, I am of the opinion that the former, such as football, is better.

On the one hand, there are sufficient grounds to argue that playing individual sports can learn how to be independent instead of relying on others. This can help enhance their personal skills like managing emotions, dealing with stress, building confidence,... Besides, people who play individual sports can focus on themself deeper to listen to what their soul wants.

On the other hand, I strongly believe that team sports play an important role in fostering the sense of community and respect both their teammates and opponents. Firstly, that give people the opportunities to interact with others. Consequently, they can develop their society and teamwork skills, which are beneficial for workplace. Another reason is that playing in team sports is also a great chance to make new friends. That helps expand their social circle and have more high quality relationships.

In conclusion,the point of view of both the groups is valid and they can learn a lot from sports and it is beneficial for their mental and physical health also. Consequently, it depends on the individual own choice whatever sports they select they can learn from it and build their self-esteem.
 
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On the other hand, I strongly believe that team sports play an important role in fostering the sense of community and respect for both their teammates and opponents. Firstly, that gives people the opportunities to interact with others
 
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